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SNOW WHITE

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this one is for :iconxrth: he wanted me to draw hime anything 18+ sexy and i hope i did^^

i have no idea what to draw so i just let myself loss and then when i was done thought...snow white^^

don't ask anyways hope you like
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

As usual you did a great job on this piece. You have an excellent grasp on your style, so this look of it it just so born-to-die! The hair is excellent with a solid flow, and your line work is good, it's very consistent (that tends to be a problem of mine, so you'll never hear me knock you on that.)

The soft glow gives it an angelic sense of innocence and purity. It's a great touch that complements the title. So good deal there. The touch on the knees are great! It gives them a a real sense of depth.

If I've got any beef with this picture it falls in the consistency department is certain area's. As good as you did on the shading (like the a fore mentioned knees) it feels over done on some things. You have a soft delicate shade on the things in the front of the picture but the shadows on her back ground parts (like torso, inner thigh, etc.) have a sharper look and kind of betray the lighting source and take away from some of the overall impact.

It also appears to be a bit off in the proportion department. It feels a bit elongated around the joints particularly her right wrist and possibly the right ankle. It feels like that at the ankle because it has the inside curve because that's where the top if the foot is, but there isn't much of an indication of an ankle bone as presented on her left foot (Hope that made sense, it was kind of hard to relay), thus it kind of looks like you were tired at that point and kind of just pulled the line down.

Her pose is a bit basic, but that's what makes it work. It has the innocence edge, so an overly exotic pose would have dampened it. Outside of that, I love it!