This is a very interesting picture^^ you should take consideration into coloring it Rem would look cool. It takes a REAL man to have bunny ears I have never seen anyone draw a man with bunny ears that was very creative, the picture looks very clean and well drawn. If you would have clolred it (if you wanted to I understand if you didn't want to) I think it would have had a really good impact on the person looking at it but that's just me, good job on the drawing and I hope you work on the manga I wanna see what happens next
i hope you dont mind i point out how you can improve the anatomy, i would want you to do better, first thing i wanna say is that Rems upper head is too small not leaving space for his fore head to show, this will correct automatically you will see his face is too wide and disproportional to the body.. would like you to see how you complete the legs, from the way i see it till the knees, the length from is usually 3/4 from the hip to neck length..
Death-by-StoneFeatured By OwnerMay 2, 2010Professional Traditional Artist
yeah that would be awesome, i dont mean to barge in on your story and characters but this just popped in my head, Theres this demon not a full on creature it has the figure of a man but the face of a demon, he wants ari hes never seen anyone so beautiful, so he goes after while shes alone, he want to marry her but he can only marry her soul so he has to kill her, ari tries to fight back with a giant axe but the demon is to fast, then rem comes in the picture stopping demon from slashing ari with his claws, he catches his hand and rips his arm off at the elbow hits the demon in the chest with an open palm making the demon fly back, he throws the severed arm down and, looks at ari, "Hey, want to gets some ice cream"?, ari is speachless you can see her words in her eyes, rem puts ari on his back and they go get some icecream, sorry for how long this is if you read all this your awesome..