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yup its back!!!

LET IT LOAD!!!

this was my very first real manga i posted here but it was taken down for various reasons.

it would be a real shame not to put this back up seeing how it took a lot of effort and work from my part.

so i have decided to edit it and censor it for you innocent DA users^^

no other changes were made so misspelling are still abundant.. sorry about that.

i would also like to mention that the next chapter will be a bit different and I'll be making some updates to the art and character design so don't be scared if the art changes^^;

PLEASE READ IT ALL and tell me what you think... again ^^
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Critique by Psycho-Schematics May 6, 2010, 7:50:53 PM
I can tell from what I've read from this you have it planned out down to the wire, the final page of the manga makes me wonder what's going to happen next between Ari and Avril. The fact that you put time into this to make the comic format like an ancutal japanese manga is a good start practice makes perfect and as far as I know I can't spot any flaws but someone else might find it for me(if there are any flaws)this is my very first time critisizing anything so keep up with the good work and I hope your manga is published one day
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hecvillanueva Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014
Me gusta mucho tu dibujo, No hay forma que me des un curso... Tambien dibujo, pero no es tan dinámico y es muy cuadrado.
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aquakitty101 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTB THIS IS YOUR FIRST MANGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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esaiXD Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
funny some of the teachers remind me of the ones from kodomo no jikan  other than that it had its funny moments but the story is a bit sad but cute in all i liked it
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LadyCircana Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
asdfjkl;....
I think I wanna cry because I wanna read more! 
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CakeKawaii Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student General Artist
kawaii i loved it
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Emi-Tanaka Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really enjoyed the manga and I love the cover art!! Oh, and one question: is the name of the manga "Tale of the Precious School" or something like that?
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B0RN-T0-DIE Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
the name is 

school tails ^^
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Emi-Tanaka Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Kewl! <D Hope I can come up with a manga name as good as that! (I seriously suck with original titles and setting names ^^')
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ysane Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
this is really good omg i love it really good
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XMidnightFantasyX Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student General Artist
I...LOVE IT,Llama Emoji 23 (Shyness) [V1]  it's amazing !! Love Love Llama Emoji 03 (Sparkles) [V1]  Is there a Part 2??
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